Heya this is my first actual post I just wrote a creepypasta of my own and i was wondering what people thought of it. This is my first story I ever actually wrote so please comment your opinion.
It was just like any other summer day, bright, sunny, and warm. Yet something was different it was Crystal’s birthday and her best friend was sleeping over, she was turning 13. Ivy had been her best friend from grade 1. 7 years together, yet they saw so much pain. Crystal’s dad had died in a car crash a mere 4 months ago and Ivy’s dog had died. The night passed and the girls slept. The next day they went to the park. The sun refle